The first version was too polite. The second version had better bones. The third version made the room smell like someone had been taking care of the day for longer than they admitted.
Keep the ginger larger. Do not rush the broth. Taste before pretending you know.
“A recipe is just a memory with instructions attached.”
Footnote 01: small photographs, captions, handwritten notes, receipt scans, ephemera, image galleries, and audio notes belong beside the writing when they help the memory.